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I am ready with my 7th story. My helper edited the all chapters well. I have recently united the chapters and my helper is rereading the all story for end edition. This story is the favorit of the my all stories. StangStar06's story "Forever Gone, Forever You" and Papatoad's story "The Dental Genes" show well in humorous form the true paternity does not regard to DNA. I will go even farer in my story.....The story is a true Romantic Revenge story (RRS)and naturaly there will be ANR in it (as I write in my all stories). The title is "Skeleton From The Cupboard: Sarah and Frank". I hope my readers will like Sarah and Frank, because I liked them very much when I wrote the story. The story second title is "Pamina, Sarastro and The Queen of The Night". Who like and know Operas, those readers recognize Mozart "The Magic Flute" opera's three characters. Yes, I confess a writting methods, I did not write my story from the first chapter step by step. I wrote some inner chapters later,after the first and lattest chapters, so I discovered my story has a far relativity to Mozart fantastic (and my most favorit) opera "The Magic Flute". I hope, who knows this Mozart Opera, those readers will understand this far relativity. I give a little help Sarastro's second central aria and the Queen Of The Night's second aria are the key points.
I began to think of the 8th story's structure, naturally this story will be revenge story with ANR again........

My helper Szilvi fixed my story "Loving Wife Dies: Bora Bora" and I sent the mended version to SOL. I told Szilvi, that the SOL editors would change the fixed version in 2-3 hours, but they changed in some minuts. Thanks SOL.
I wrote a little explanation in two parts of the story, to explain Max did not say he forgave Martha. Some feedback persuaded me to show stronger, he did not say "I forgave this shit to you." this is important.
I am writting my 7th story and I am planning my 8th story, where a beautifull 21 years old amputee will be the second chance woman.........

I will follow that practise, that I will publish my grammar fixed stories. I write my stories to those readers who can enjoy my story plots, characters and ideas of my stories and who do not think the most important the literature style. If somebody who think the literature style is important and this reader likes my stories and has enough time, energy and skilled, that reader could assist me with edition. I found such reader, who edited the first chapter of "I Am Not a Shark, But an Orca". However this editor disappiered after the edited first chapter.
Why I write the majorities of my stories in the North American Continent? If somebody look at the revenge stories, the 95% of them the authors write to the North American Continent. The remained 5% of the revenge stories comes from the British Isles or Scandinavia. The reason is interesting. Some USA states the results of the modern sciences arrive to the family law,as DNA test. So an ex husband do not have to pay children support for bastard child if the child are below 4 years old. If the child is above 4 years old, according to the children psychologists, the children can remember the dad. The 4 years old limit has a children psychologia cause. If the bastard is above 4 years old, the ex husband can start law suit against the biological father to pay setlement.
This law possibilities are unknown in the European family law. In Europe the children custody decision is 99.999% to the mother, but in North America the possibilties for children custody is higher percentage to the father and there are new family law news, as the common custody. So to get the children custody by the father is not a unbelievable thing in Northern America. For example the mother cheats in front of her children (or in same house with the children) and the husband can justify this or the husband can confirm the wife is not responsible mother, the children custody decision can become not one way rout, against Europe. A husband can divorce from a cheater ill wife in the USA, for example against the Hungarian family law. Some other tiny things are able to put the revenge storie plots into the North American continent.
My stories are small propagative to review new ideas, things. First it all the ANR sex. I think this sex connection the most intime and thight among the sex relations between man and woman. I think it is not accidental some marriage counselors have just discovered, as marriage sefty buoy and they recommend to such pairs, as Ann and Jim are in "Different Gyms Do Train the Body Better". Almost every story there are some ANR and my characters discover this sex, together with my ignorant readers.
"The Two Wimps" is an example to the Down syndrome blood test how it can help older pairs to try producing children.
In my two stories I use the new scientific result the infidelity home tests, which a new instrumet to avoid creampies for husbands...........and naturaly the DNA test.

My 6th story is published, so the readers can read soon. The title is "The Two Wimps". The story is a Revenge Story with all three weapons of the Revenge Stories. However I think the romantic is a main part of this story. The intelectual core of this story is more comments and stories, which not taken into account the checking of Down syndrom by blood test for pregnants above 40 years old. First I thought this when I read Matt Moreau's story "Riley and Wilfred Burton". The 5th chapter is a special answer to MM's mentioned story. I wrote ANR for the positive pair again and I hope many readers will find interesting this story. My story is without English speaking editor, only Szilvi fixed the grammar mistakes. If somebody edits my story I will publish the edited version.

I was ready with my raw 6th story yesterday. I sent to mend for grammar mistakes to Szilvi. I have not any editor so my newer story will be without native English
speaking editor. I am sorry for this at my readers. I recommend my readers to concentrate for the plot and the characters, the style is not 100% literature. If my lack of edition stories are edited I will publish the literature versions.
My 6th story will be a revenge story again, with ANR in it. My positive charcters generaly live in ANR connection in my stories. I hope I can publish my story at the end of April or at the begining of May.
The title is "The Two Wimps". Against the titel this story is a true classical revenge story.
I have newer story plans in my mind.
Here I give a short introduction about the revenge stories:
The revenge stories have 3 main weapons.
1.The Cruel revenge weapon. Many ignorant readers think these are the revenge stories. In the medieval era in the XIV Century may be this was the alone revenge, when the divorce was forbidden, but we live in the XXI Century. The cruel revenge has many types, which is not so violent, as the ignorant readers think. There are many humorous cruel revenge stories. (Unfortunately many good examples are only on the SOL or only on the Literotica, so I will show examples from Literotica and SOL as well in the more part of my introduction)
2.Modern Figaro Type revenge weapon. The husband or the friend(s) of the husband use such smart tricks which cause him big advantage in the divorce or give so big payback which is good healing up from the family disaster. The husband gets the children custody or etc… Sometime these stories are very humorous.
3.The Romantic revenge weapon. To live better after divorce is not revenge, but this better living causes emotional shock or other emotional discomforts at the cheating exwife is revenge.
I use all three revenge weapons in my stories. Some stories one or two weapons, but for example in the "Different Gyms Do Train The Body Better" there are all three revenge weapons in seven revenge situations.