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hello again just thought I'd clear up a few things that some people are still having problems with, but the good news there is not as many as last time.
1. for the people that have problems with selling and grammar there are a few differences between Australian and US English and im Australian, and i don't really care about scores. i just simply want to tell the story thats in my head and i thought i would share it with the world.
and sirgeek is currently re-editing the first 3 chapters so be patient.
and i change perspective when i think its needed when you see this ______________________________ it means the perspective and or location has changed.
chapter 5 is still in progress but it is a bit stop/start at the moment.
Dreaw Mac
hi all my dedicated readers sorry for being quiet for a while on top of searching for a second editor, i had a few small IT jobs pop up.
so even tho it is later than usual chapter 4 is with my my new editor sirgeek.
and as a side not for those people that say there are still errors in grammar, i live in Australia and our grammar is slightly different to the USA for example the length of a sentence and the use of commas
DREAW MAC
OK guys and girls thank you for all your feed back and being brutally honest with me about my mistakes the kind of mistakes my editor should have seen and fix.
so as of now im looking for a more experienced editor one that will make it so i can concentrate on my plots and not worry to much about the spelling and grammar.
my second chapter is done and will be the test for anyone interested.
oh and to answer the questions of some about realism
he was under the influence of the probe when he reached out and touched it
and the prob is teaching him about his abilities in his dreams, that is why he can leave the hospital yet
alright guys chapter chapter 3 is done its only 4 pages long but don't worry as the story progresses they will get bigger so its with my reviewer now so it should be up soon
i want to thank everyone who sent feedback and those who offered to edit/proof for me.
im thinking of keeping two for the different perspectives and their speed.
ive sent both chapter 1 and 2 for posting so they should be up soon.
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