Dark Apostle: Blog

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So I've done & completed three whole chapters of the story and I was wondering if I should post them. I'm stuck at Highschool with the classes and doing those particular 'scenes,' maybe if people can read these they would be more willing to help out?

Trying to replicate the fight scene in Iron Man 2, can anyone help?

The reviews for Hoist have been stronger and better than the score, I can live with that. Thank you for all your kind comments. I put Hoist down as completed, because it stands well on its own as a standalone in the 'James universe.' It also means that I can concentrate on the second chapter and get it right before posting it. When I've done chapter two, it too will be posted as completed and then I will eventually work on three. I'm a slow poster, as some have no doubt guessed lmao.

I would like to make a request, I still want to work on my do over series, the stories that I'm plugging out are a part of the series as a whole but feel uncompleted until I've done the do over. If there is anyone out there that can help me with the aspect of High School that would be greatly appreciated. I've done work on the Do Over but have only gotten to a point and am stuck, without further assistance I cannot progress.

For the High school I wanted to do

-Details on the classes that James would take, so the times they are at, the teachers he has, the students in the classes, what the classrooms look like, teachers and their 'fashions' and what possibly happens to them in the future. The classes would also include sections of the class, question and answers and would be spread over a period of ten chapters, give or take. The High School part of his life I wanted to do over 30 chapters and then moving onto a shorter college life of maybe 15 to 20 chapters. This would then take me into his military career. I know, it's cliché innit, almost every Do over has had Military career in it. This leads me to part two!

-I've done some introduction to James as a Staff Sergeant - Army Marine Sniper. This is the introduction I've done, with the help of Remo Jackson on James as a Sniper.

From these same memories he knew about hunting, fishing and tracking game of all sizes. He knew how to stalk and track prey and read signs in the bush that were albeit invisible to anyone but him. He had used this in the military to great effect, eventually training to become an Army Ranger. He had then gone onto the Special Forces SOTIC leaving that course as a qualified Sniper, the best of the best, one shot, one kill. James had met Andy Green at Ranger in Processing, the first stage to becoming a Ranger. They were then assigned to the same battalion after graduation and he found that the two worked well together and when James qualified for SOTIC, Andy went as his spotter. James needed someone he could trust to watch his back and James trusted no one more than Andy.

I wanted to do his military career, perhaps over ten chapters but big chapters, this includes the start of his mission to the end of the mission and going home. The end of that part would then move into his next part as civilian life and the building of his career.

Lastly. I'm looking for anyone who can help me with Revolvers from the wild west, gunslinger style. I've tried reading the novel in order to get some tips and tricks on it, but damn if the Gunslinger isn't fucking hard to read. And I thought Lord of the Rings was bad oO. I wanted to do things like fanning and trick shots, the style would be in the third person POV and would revolve around either the Wild west or a post-apocalyptic style, like Into the Badlands or The Gunslinger movie. The movie sucked but I like the idea. Please let me know if you can help! And for the love of God, don't direct me to YouTube it is NO help ?

It starts of with a clubbing scene, the vampire walks into the club and people part out of the way and he realizes that it's happening again, they sense a predator in the room.

Can't find it, tried googling it, even tried Alexa... nothing. Any help would be appreciated!