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Chapter 4

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Finally starting to get into the groove of things and getting ahead in my writing so these should be coming more often then they have. I'm starting to finally jump into the main story line so you'll see longer chapters also.

Hope you've been enjoying so far, thanks for the feedback everyone!

Chapter 3

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Sorry about the long delay before posting this chapter. I wanted to get more written and make sure it flowed well before posting.

A few things, I know it's normally not the greatest idea to fire a gun on a plane, I'm assuming the armor will keep small arms fire from puncturing and depressurizing the plane in this case.

I hope everyone keeps tuned for future chapters, it'll start to get interesting as it comes from here. We'll see more of the individual characters and their personalities and some quirks start to appear as they start showing their ages.

Please let me know if you have any feedback!

Chapter 2

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I know this chapter might seem a little out there, but I decided to jump right in and have some fun instead of dragging along the story for awhile. I know in all actuality it would most likely be harder to seize the plane, but for this story I'll leave it as is.

I'm open to any feedback and will certainly take any ideas or corrections into consideration. Thanks for reading!

Chapter 1

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I've updated Chapter 1 with some new formatting that will hopefully fix a few things as well as updating a few technical things.

Thanks for everyone that sent me feedback and especially those of you who let me know that firing a LAW inside a plane was a bad idea. Didn't totally think that one through evidently. I've fixed that one so thanks for the feedback.

Chapter 2 will be coming soon and the others a few days apart from each other after that for now. Hope to hear from more of you after Chapter 2! Thanks for reading everyone.

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