Sorry about the delay in posting. New Job and work commitments, I also had some tutoring on dialog, so now I have rewrites to do.
Thanks for the positve comments, I hope to post weekly now.
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BuzzyBee
I'm splitting the Prolog and Chapter one to fix a numbering issue.
I'm also updating some of the issues raised by readers in these two chapters as well, many thanks for their input.
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BuzzyBees.
I'd like to thank all those who provided feed back on my first story and finally those who offered editorial services and advice. I'm feel overwhelmed by the number of authors that offer their valuable time and tallent to improve my writing, if I haven't responded personally to your feedback or email please don't feel slighted, I will endeavour to reply to them as soon as I can.
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