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-" Computer?"
-" Yes TimeTech2 Butonia. What can I do for you?"
-" Demolecularize the body on the floor please"
-" That procedure is not allowed on Brissians. I can remove it to Cryo-chamber until the Mortuary Department takes the body off the ship. Would that be satisfactory for you TimeTech2 Butonia?"
-" You do understand what I'm undertaking here don't you?"
-" Yes I do TimeTech2 Butonia."
-" I will not surrender until I see this to the end, wich means that I'm ready to die before I give myself up. Extrapolate from there. If I don't surrender, what will the HC do when they find us?"
-" They will kill you and destroy the ship and go back to Brissa."
-" Now you see what I mean. Demolecularize Ditilan while I see what I can do to help out my Human down there."
Chapter 17 as been sent for editing. Sorry for the long wait. I will try to get the next one out asap.
Book 1 is almost over and I'm working on book 2 and 3.
Belior
Chapter 16 is done and sent to be edited. I'll post it as soon as it comes back. A lot of questions will be answered in this chapter, leaving just enough to let you wonder at what will become of Rock and his entourage.
I'm back from vacation and noticed a big mistake I made that was passed over twice by my new Editor. I'm very sorry about that. Should of known better but I missed it. Yes BC was changed to AD and I also sent in his revised version of the first 14 chapters.
Belior
I'm going over and reposting all chapters after correcting a lot of my spelling errors and I fu-k up on the names of my wives. That's what you get when you have more then one mate lol. In reading it again, you guesses it, I changed more then a few things so you might want to take the time to go over it again.
Again please be lenient with me. My French gets in the way most often then not. Have a nice day and a good reading.
Belior.
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