B. A. Bay: Blog

Office Skills

February 20, 2007
Posted at 10:57 pm

My second story.

This time, I sent it to a few authors. One of them sent it back with some corrections, and I realize that while he didn't change any of the story, it reads better this way.

He also pointed me to some grammar sites on the net.

I hope the next chapter (if there is one) won't need so much editing.