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Ch 5

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Well gang, I have read and responded to most if not all your emails(all 356 of them). I do have a comment, all of you have been very nice in your emails, so thank you. Even those who gave a 1-3 vote, I'm certain have valid reasons.

Ch 5 introduced Mei Li, brings Li Wu closer and gets Rob to at least face Jody and Julie and think about what they had done and why.

I see our readers who like to give a 1 vote are still alive

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I wondered for a long time why reviewers and readers cast a 1, 2 or a 3 vote while others vote 8, 9 or 10.

But, these stories are for you, the reader. It is just hard to understand a 1 vote, I know other authors feel the same.

Getting closer to finding a possible way to satisfy the 906 of you that wrote to try to 'save' the Tiny Terror. Think I also saw the real thing today, but my wife won't let me adopt her. Oh well, deep subject and I digress.

If I do what I'm thinking, ch 3 and 4 will be replaced and posted as 5 and 6 but less harsh with Jody and may or may not include the slaves. Thanks Mike.

Mea Culpa

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I guess you all like the 'Tiny Terror' and think I was a little unfair to her. Well, your right, I was wrong. My only excuse is I really know that she is not always what she seems to be. But, I did do her wrong in this story. Not sure how to fix it but I was thinking of a companion piece just dealing about Jody and Julie before they meet Rob. I may also write a short piece about Rob before his wealth and all the insecurities he has.

Let me know what you think folks.

If the ideas of slaves is a wrong move let me know. There should be nothing in these stories which would be explicit sex not even implied with a minor.

Ch 3 and 4

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Our poor editor now has ch 3 and 4. I made a small mistake, never sent him the ch 3 stuff. Then to make thing worse ch 4 kept growing and growing. I introduced some new characters in ch 4. The tiny terror and her mom are not going away, just doing time in the penalty box for bad behavior. Speaking of which, there are some things in ch 4 some may think are naughty but there is no explicit or even implied sex. There is more spice though.

Ch 1 has been reposted

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Ch 1 has been reposted, ch 2 added and ch 3 is on its way for proofing.

I have made a public Universe called 'Changes'. It is meant to deal with what and how even a single person can make something happen. There are no restrictions that it be a town or village or that the character even be human.

By the way, the use of Mollie, then Julie for the Mother's name is not an error. More concerning the 2 names will appear in Ch's 4 - 8.

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