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Reviews by Teloz
About Teloz:
An Englishman and proud of it, I've been an avid reader since I first learned to read. I've written much and published little, mainly because I'm my own worst critic, though I did edit a parish magazine for four and a half years, writing regular articles, and editorials.

I rarely recap the story in my reviews, the reader should have read the blurb first, so no point reiterating it, and anyway, the author should have composed the blurb to hook the reader in the first place. In a review, what I feel about the story is what's important.

I try never to let cultural differences affect my review, I know some people can't help it if they can't spell 'colour', or they call a 'lift' an 'elevator'. Luckily, I speak, and read, fluent American!

Just as an aside, talking about the authors blurb, one of the best ways to turn me off a story is to put up a blurb riddled with misspellings, lack of capitalisation, or poor grammar. If you want to sell your story to a reader, the blurb needs as much attention as the whole thing. Just remember APPPP! (A proper précis pulls the punter!)
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Will You Still Love Me in the Morning? AJ Martin 9 7 10
Will Work 4 Food! TheMoose63 9 9 10
Whoppers BrotherJohn 10 9 10
When Lori Entered Our Life Losgud 9 9 10
Connecting Rod Coaster2 10 9 10
Collateral Damage Coaster2 9 9 9
Better Than New Coaster2 9 8 10
Airstream Dreams Coaster2 9 9 9
Wenatchee Coaster2 10 9 10
Evening School WTSman 10 9 10
Always There WTSman 9 9 10
Daughters of Priapus Athalia 10 9 10
Fmf GentleButFirm 9 9 10
A Winter's Warmth Jonas 10 9 10
Who Watches the Watchers? (Re-Written) Stultus 10 7 10
A Private Eye and the Moral Dilemma Gina Marie Wylie 10 9 10
Junkin Duncan happyhugo 9 9 10
It Ain't Halloween! Aeralyndal 10 9 10
Twins A. Quarterman 9 8 10
Coming Home A. Quarterman 8 7 9
Why Didn't I Just... Openbook 9 8 9
Service Society Lazlo Zalezac 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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