Mike and Malok by mcguy101

Author's Description:
Yes, you know how this works: Modern man transported to alien world that is a clone of prehistoric Earth. Here's my take. Thanks to cmsix for the inspiration.
Size: 563 KB ( ~ 106,761 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Drunk/Drugged, Mind Control, Reluctant, Romantic, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Extra Sensory Perception, Far Past, Time Travel, Group Sex, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, White Female, Oriental Female, Hispanic Female, Anal Sex, Oral Sex, Squirting, Big Breasts, Prostitution, Violent

Review by Safe_Bet   [other reviews by Safe_Bet]

Reviewed: 2018-05-06


I started reading this story way back in 2014 when it started. I liked it then and I like it now.

PLOT: There is only so much you can do with an "aliens transport someone to a prehistoric planet" story that hasn't been done (and it was nice that he gave CMSIX the credit due), but there were enough plot twists & turns to keep it from being boilerplate. There also was plenty of unique intrigue, romance and erotic content to make it well worth reading. (The very last sentence made me laugh, as well.)

TECHNICAL: Well written with no noticeable errors.

APPEAL: I liked it, but I didn't love it. It certainly is worth the read, however, the biggest down side, IMO, is that there were too many characters. I ended up having to re-read from the beginning and I still lost track of whose wife was whose. I also think I'd have enjoyed it more if it would have been a few chapters shorter. (and this might reflect my frustration of having it go on for so long).

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8