The Adventures of a Greenie (GC IV) by Vanessa Ravencroft

Description: Roy Masters, a Teenager raised on a dangerous planet by scientist parents, finds a strange animal in the Jungles and that's when everything started to change. Roy find himself on a virtual roller coaster ride through the Galaxy, chased by Kermac Agents...
Size: 692 KB ( ~ 131,224 words)
Type: Mind Control
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Mind Control, Science Fiction, Extra Sensory Perception, Military

Review by Riceeyes   [other reviews by Riceeyes]

Reviewed: 2013-02-01

A mystery-action-adventure-coming of age story.

Roy lives on Green Hell, a world where the plants and animals are lethal to humanoid life forms. Roy however has learned to somewhat co-exist with the other life forms on GH. He has a group of friends who also are able to exist among the GH life forms. While this group of friends has kept this ability as a secret it later becomes discovered. Someone wants something from GH and wants Roy to use his abilities to help them find it. Lots of conflicts with the bad guys which Roy must overcome. Along the way the story introduces other aliens and some individuals with unique abilities. There is much more to the plot than this but I read the story to find it. I don’t think you will regret it. Sample the first chapter and you will be hooked.

I enjoyed this story a lot. The author has created an interesting universe and the plot of the fit into very well.

No sex. Some minor typos. If none of that deters you, I think this is a story you would have a hard time putting down once you start it. I look forward to the other stories in this universe especially those that involve these characters.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10