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Retiring South of the Border by Howard Faxon

Author's Description:
retirement is such a drag. What with the changes in lifestyle and limited income what's a guy to do? Step it up a notch, that's what!
Size: 228 KB ( ~ 43,236 words)
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Romantic, Fiction, Slow, Workplace

Review by barron of ideas   [other reviews by barron of ideas]

Reviewed: 2015-09-25

I have been reading a lot of this author's stories lately. There are similarities. Howard tells you how to do things and his hero does them. This one is the best I have read, so far. I have also been reading Celeste reviews and am convinced by her example sometimes short reviews are best. Imagine that.

Read this story. If you don't like it, I strongly suspect you won't like anything I review favorably. Its a 9 for Reviewer appeal because I already used my ten this month. There were no technical issues. Well, using Vladimir Putin as a character might be. He comes across here a lot more pleasant than reality. Call it a 9. The plot is disclosed mostly in the story description. Lets give it an 8, which is an A.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9