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Family Feud by Amanda Serve fan ficton. An alternate reality was created when Jamie Taylor had her massive orgasm on the tattoo booth floor. This is the story of that universe. Find out what happens when everything goes wrong for the Taylor family.
Size: 290 KB (56,560 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
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Review by amandaserve   [other reviews by amandaserve]

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What can I say about Family Feud an Alternate Reality Fanfic?

Dave wrote to me quite some time ago and was very angry with me. At first, I didn't really understand why. He wasn't telling me I was a terrible author he was just angry with the direction the story had taken.

I realized that his angry letter was a bit like if someone took a favorite Star Trek character and put a mustache on them or killed them off.

Instead of going off on him (too much) which would be my normal habit, I continued to talk to him. He started writing an alternate reality fanfic with the characters in my story.

That is tremendously flattering and a real joy to read the direction he is taking things with his version.

In it, he picks up after the events of Family Feud I and II and a few chapters into Family Feud III when the girls get their tattoos.

He doesn't write like I do. I tend to write like I talk, so my grammar is often a little sloppier. However, I really enjoy reading this and I hope you will check it out.

At first I thought it may be confusing since his timeline is different than mine. One of the secondary characters I hear most about is Cathy Griffin and usually people either love to hear more about her (and a few say much less).

Dave goes the more popular route of making Cathy a central character in the Taylor household which is really intriguing to me.

I hope you will give it a read and encourage him to continue to add to it.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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