Reviewed: 2016-03-10 - (Review Updated: 2016-03-10)
This story appealed to me but it might not be for everyone. There is a lot of sex, not all of it with humans. If bestiality is one of your squicks, this isn't the story for you. It contains an appeal for tolerance that rings true to me, although you need to wade through a lot of semen to get it.
The plot is serviceable, with the twist that takes it from a one chapter sex story to six chapters that include a surprising amount of character development. I will give it a seven, which is a B. The technical quality is somewhere between B and C. Call it a 6.5 rounded up to a seven. Another B but a B minus. There are some misspellings and homonym issues, but it isn't worse than a lot of stories on the site, and better than most. Appeal to reviewer is a solid B, another seven. Maybe close to an eight, but I don't want to mislead anyone who thinks an eight is my equivalent of a ten. Lets call it a B plus but not close enough to an eight to make it an A. Plenty of sex, not given in agonizing detail. There is also some cuckoldry and cream pie eating by the husband and a few others. As I said it isn't for everybody, but it appealed to me. Maybe its the 14 year old slut calling the hero "Daddy".
Read the story description and look at the tags. If this is the kind of thing you might like, try it, I liked it and I am not an "I like everything" reviewer.