A teenage girl meets an upscale couple at a party and goes home with them. Is she in it for the kicks? Or for the money? Or both? This is a true story. Some of the sex was added for your entertainment.
Size: 5 KB (1,167 words)
Genre: Flash
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, True Story
Review by orangeade [other reviews by orangeade]
Reviewed:
Writing a good flash story is something of an art. To hit that perfect tone, to develop the characters just enough, to find just the right erotic level in precious few words, is a real achievement, and Chandra does just that in "Teenage Predator or Teenage Prostitute."
Using a raw version of first-person, Chandra gives us a protagonist who's a user with no conscience, and who bloodlessly draws two easily led characters into a very hot erotic dalliance. This isn't really a story for character development, as the titular predator/prostitute and her two marks never get past being archetypes. But the author wrings a full serving of lust, guilt and exploitation out of what's basically a single scene.
This isn't the kind of tale that's going to give you much hope for the human spirit. But it will likely lead your hand to stray between your thighs, and isn't that really the point?
