On a cold, rainy night in February, Jim finds his 16 year old neighbor, Julie, in a nightie on his front porch cold, wet, and very pregnant. He takes her in and cares for her. His life is changed from that point on. When he wins the lottery, not only do his and Julie's life get more interesting, so do the lives of his friends and employees.
Size: 228 KB (44,115 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Rape, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Lactation, Pregnancy, Military
Review by Xalir [other reviews by Xalir]
Reviewed:
I love this story. I've read it through three times now and I continue to enjoy it. The sex isn't particularly pervasive, but it's there for the reader who prefers their stories to have it. It's hot and well-described and central to the story without drowning the rest of the tale.
I caught a couple of grammatical or spelling errors and a place or two where I thought the dialogue felt a little contrived, not what they were say, but how they worded the sentiment.
The tale could have been longer, concentrating more on some of the side relationships and beefing the supporting characters, but that would have detracted from the main characters to some degree.
I recommend this story to anyone in specific and Uncle Jim to anyone who enjoyed it. Check out his other works. They're worth it.
