Drawn Apart by Jay Cantrell


Description: David and Julie loved one another but couldn't co-exist as husband and wife. It's been 5 years since their divorce and their lives have changed dramatically. Is it too late for a second chance?
Size: 219 KB ( ~ 41,529 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Romantic

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2009-02-17


Simply OUTSTANDING.

This has the ups, downs and the in between that make a good story so readable.

Love/lust found and lost, found again and lost again. Then there is the wild card to be played later.

Without giving everything away, you will thoroughly enjoy the inter-play and character development that takes place and makes this one nice ride.

This proves you don't need stroke by stroke description or an OB/gyn report to write a good solid story.

No FD rating but close. Just adult themes handled by adults as adults. (Does that make sense?)

I deliberately waited until it was totally posted before I read it and man am I happy I did.

Don't pass this one up.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10