A Less Than Perfect Family Christmas by pointless

Author's Description:
Rachel and Jenna, two step sisters, decide to escape from their fighting parents and end up having an experience that will change their relationship forever.
Size: 70 KB ( ~ 13,274 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Fa/Fa, Consensual, Drunk/Drugged, Lesbian, Sister, Safe Sex, Oral Sex

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-09-09

I was really enjoying A Less Than Perfect Family Christmas right up to the point where the strap-on cock came out. I know I'm a mere male, and there's much I don't understand about women, but surely, if a lady wants full on penetrative sex, the real thing has to be better than plastic? Especially if the owner has been properly trained.

I'm sorry ladies, I can understand why you'd like to make love to another woman, they're generally softer, sweeter, and more gentle, but there's tribbing, frotting, fists, fingers, and a tongue to help, so I can't understand a plastic penis substitute, unless it's a double-ender maybe. Anyone that can enlighten me as to the reasoning behind their use, is welcome to email me, as long as it's not anonymously.

Getting off my soap box, A Less Than Perfect Family Christmas is a good story, technically, as well as being a good read. Having said that, there are quite a few missing words that force the reader to double-take the sentence, but not enough to spoil the story. The characters are believable, but the plot is far from original though pointless handles it well. If it hadn't been for the plastic prong, the Appeal to Reviewer score would have been ten, but that's just me.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8