I'll Dance at Your Wedding (Revised) by Stultus

Author's Description:
Everyone's favorite disaffected eccentric uncle honors an old solemn pledge, unloads a domestic burden and finds True Love all in the course of a rainy afternoon at a garden wedding reception. A quirky romantic reminder that sometimes you do get second chances in life.
Size: 35 KB ( ~ 6,637 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2011-12-21

This is a great story, and well worth reading, but if it truly was edited by DragonsWeb, OldFart, RastaDevil, WanderingScot and Sweet Sue, they should all be damned well ashamed of themselves! Truthfully, if I presented an MS to an editor in the state this one's in, let alone published it, I would be ashamed of myself!

Still a good story though, and well worth reading.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 5 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9