Tim Davis meets Emma Foreman. He stands her up on a dinner date. She is so angry she never wishes to see him again. A month later they bump into each other on the street. Fireworks begin and leads them through life where all Emma craves is Tim's touch.
Size: 305 KB (59,391 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, ft/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Slow
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "Touch", we have the story of Emma Foreman and Tim Davis. They meet at a party, and decide to go on a date. Tim stands Emma up, then comes to apologize a month later. Does she accept the apology? Read along to find out.
The sex in the story is just ok. I didn't find it all that erotic. While frequent, it just doesn't have a good descriptive quality to it.
The story itself is pretty weak, and the characters are all quite simplistic for a story of this length. The whole "touch" thing that the story is named after is never really explored or expounded on by either the characters or the author. The twin sister segments just felt like it was a major stretch within the frame of telling Emma's and Tim's tale, adding little of value to the overall story.
Technically, there were numerous errors that made for awkward reading at times. Words such as "to" and "be" were left out with some frequency, and words were used incorrectly. This story would have benefited quite a bit from a strong editor.
Overall, I found this story to be a bit below average in quality and plot, and there wasn't much stroke value.
