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Author's Description:
Nick Capuzzo was content with his life...starting his senior year in high school, playing in the marching band, having some good friends and people that looked up to him. Nick thought he knew where his future led, until the day the annual Marching Band Flag Football game changed his life forever. (This will be a long, slow story, so you are forewarned. Also, it is NOT based on the TV series or movie)
Size: 365 KB (69,725 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Romantic, Rape, Drunk/Drugged, Heterosexual, Sports, Slow, Violent, School

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed:


Friday Night Lights is a great story with superb possibilities. Alas the author has chosen to not finish this story. The lead character was believable in a fictional world and developing nicely. The supporting cast was coming along to the point that they were folks that were not created to add colour but actually contribute to various sub plots.

Unfortunately we, the readers, will not be able to finish following the story to it's completion.

I'll wait for future stories from the Senator to be completed before reading.

I'll give this one a fail. Although I will also revise this Review if the story gets finished.

'sheets

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: N/A

Review by BlackIrish   [other reviews by BlackIrish]

Reviewed:


Coming of age, teen angst, high school drama, blah-blah-blah, you know the drill...WAIT A MINUTE!
This is a good story, potentially a very good story. It's early and that mean's we're 'in progress' which can be frustrating. So be patient.
There's no sex to speak of so far - which isn't a bad thing, it just means so far.
I'm basing my review on characters and plot. So far, the characters are interesting and the plot can go a number of ways which should keep us interested.
I'm cautiously optimistic. We may be waiting since The Senator has already warned us that postings won't be frequent. That being said, keep checking.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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