Amber's Enslavement by dweaver999

Description: Amber wakes up with no memories of who or where she is. She quickly learns that she has been kidnapped and given amnesia to make her a slave to House Grantlo on the magical world of Destran. What will happen to her when she's given the choice of accepting her slavery or dying?
Size: 361 KB ( ~ 68,456 words)
Type: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Ma/Ma, Consensual, NonConsensual, Reluctant, Mind Control, Drunk/Drugged, Magic, Slavery, Gay, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fiction, Furry, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, FemaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Light Bond, Torture, Gang Bang, Group Sex, Orgy, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2008-11-03

In "Amber's Enslavement", we have the story of the just turned 18 Amber, a girl who has been given a memory erasing draught and wakes to find herself a slave. But for some reason, the though of being a sex slave terrifies her, despite those erased memories. Read along as Amber tries to understand her fears and the way she feels.

The sex in the story I found to be arousing some of the time, but not all of the time. There is a considerable amount of S&M that is used, and Amber turns out to be a "pain slut", or a woman that gets off on painful stimuli. If the thought of a woman being beaten for punishment or sexual pleasure bothers you, stay away.

The plot itself is quite interesting. It is similar in nature to the Narlass series by A Strange Geek, but different enough to be a good read. The plot does hop around in time a bit to explain things, and the author used a deft touch with that aspect to build the plot's tension.

Technically, the story was very well written. I noticed a missing quote symbol a time or two, but other than that, it was very clean.

Overall, I liked this story. The S&M layer was not too much for me to handle, as many of the recipients truly enjoyed the pain the received. S&M play is all about the context and the level of enjoyment by the recipient, and the author handled it well, in my opinion.

If you like stories with BDSM elements, this one should fit you well.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8