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A sexist remark whilst chatting among friends in the dorms after class gets Doug in big trouble with the girls. But wait...
Size: 15 KB (2,962 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Humiliation, Oral Sex, Water Sports, Flatulence, School

Review by 7steven7seven7   [other reviews by 7steven7seven7]

Reviewed:


The short story "Human Mattress" (2008) by Hungry Guy is the first of a pair of stories about a college student with a secret desire to sleep on women as mattresses to use them sexually and in other ways at the same time. He does not force them to do this. He discovers, to his surprise and delight, that many young women at his school want to do it!

Mr. Guy's writing is crisp and direct. His grammar and spelling are top notch. The story itself moves along swiftly, without any needless digressions.

The greatest strength of this quite short story is in its depiction of the reactions of the young women. When our hero, Doug, first reveals his secret desire, he is denounced by campus feminists. Later, one by one, curious women ask to become his mattress for a night.

What does it mean to be a human mattress? I'll quote directly from the story, where Doug explains it to a woman:

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"I'll tie you to the bed with your ass up against the headboard and your legs splayed out in a V against the headboard and your ankles tied to the top of the posts. Then I'll tie your wrists up over your head to the corners at the foot of the bead. You'll be under the covers and I'll sleep on top of you all night long. You'll be my human mattress."

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Sounds all cuddly and cozy, doesn't it? Well, almost. But there's a bit more to the procedure, as Doug goes on to explain:

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"This is called a spider gag. The ring goes in your mouth, but the 'spider legs' stick out so that you can't swallow it by accident or flip it out of your mouth with your tongue."

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Once his naked woman has been tied in place with her mouth held open by a spider gag, Doug climbs aboard, inserts his penis into her mouth, and settles in for a restful night.

Did I say restful? Eventful is more like it.

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"Relaxing his hips, he let his cock slide down into her mouth. He felt his cock bending sharply at the back of her mouth and down her throat. The feeling was incredible!

Despite her bounds, her body was bucking and twitching under him, and her gag reflex was massaging his cock with so much strength that he didn't have to pump her mouth. She did all the work. In a moment, he shot his wad down her gasping throat over and over again in one of the most powerful orgasms he had ever felt. Her gag reflex continued milking his cock, and he kept flooding her throat, in a vicious feedback loop.

And what a rush, too! To use a woman like this! To know that she was experiencing utter humiliation and intense pain for no other reason than to give him physical pleasure. Oh man! What a rush!"

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Need I say more, my friends?

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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