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A woman returns to the town she left behind fourteen years ago and struggles to overcome her past and find love and happiness.
Size: 931 KB (176,372 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, NonConsensual, Rape, Heterosexual, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Humiliation, Oral Sex, Slow, Violent, Prostitution

Review by Devil95   [other reviews by Devil95]

Reviewed:


Fabulous!

What a great story. Very well written. The storyline was a cross between 'Pretty Woman' and 'The Godfather'. Ok, maybe not 'The Godfather' completely, but close enough.

I like that this story is fiction, but could easily have been non fiction. Every scene, every action could have realistically happened.

If I were the author, I would try and get this story pitched to a movie studio. There are stories that have much less appeal that have made the crossover to cinema.

On a scale of 1-5 paddles, this receives a 5 from me.

Plot: N/A | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: N/A

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed:


Whew! I made it to the end! Don't get me wrong, it was a fantastic story! I loved it, all of it, but I was in a weird state of mind when I began reading this story and I so wanted a good ending and was so afraid I would not get one.

I actually wrote to the author before I finished the story, just to get reasurance!

Anyway, this story is all about Angelica as the name indicates. She returns to her hometown some 14 years after a tragedy in her life caused her to leave.

The story is intense, well written, and deals with a girl who became a woman and a mother before she was ready, and her subsequent life and struggles.

It is also about family, love, forgivness, longing, and happiness. There are several related sub plots that lend a real flavor of life to the story. What made it more realistic and enjoyable is the characters are not 2 dimensional fixed evil or good characters. They are flesh and blood with human emotions thoughts and feelings.

Give this one a read, I truly think you will enjoy this story, I know I did!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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