This story could have been edited better, but it was still better than average technically. The story was fairly original, and very, very sweet. Pretty much to the point I'd recommend having insulin ready before reading to the end. It's definitely not a typical love story, or a typical escapist fantasy, but rather something just a little different.
Readers who like their romance with a heavy dose of sugar will enjoy this. Anyone looking for anything other than that will likely want to choose something else.