This story brings back memories, as a teen I was this story. 'Orblover' has a very vicious sense of humor, the poor husband, instead of cuddling with the wife, gets sent out into a snow storm to assemble a trampoline, in the middle of the night!
The story takes the reader on an abusive stroll into the shed, in the snow, in the dark, on Christmas eve. I cringed as accident after accident befalls him. On the story as a whole it was funny but I personally would not get in a situation like that. The plot was good, did not notice any glaringly errors, the story grew on me as I became involved in the story.
So an early Christmas treat to build up to that special time of year. Marry Christmas!!!