Santa Klutz by Orblover


Description: A remembrance of Christmases past and the things we do as fathers. A bit of reality, a hint of tragedy. No sex except a bit of husband and wife teasing.
Size: 14 KB ( ~ 2,655 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Humor

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: 2016-10-04


This story brings back memories, as a teen I was this story. 'Orblover' has a very vicious sense of humor, the poor husband, instead of cuddling with the wife, gets sent out into a snow storm to assemble a trampoline, in the middle of the night!

The story takes the reader on an abusive stroll into the shed, in the snow, in the dark, on Christmas eve. I cringed as accident after accident befalls him. On the story as a whole it was funny but I personally would not get in a situation like that. The plot was good, did not notice any glaringly errors, the story grew on me as I became involved in the story.

So an early Christmas treat to build up to that special time of year. Marry Christmas!!!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10