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Finding the right woman isn't as easy as he thought. What if you find here and then lose her? I'll post part 2 & 3 in the next couple of days. Please look for it.
Size: 108 KB (22,285 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, School

Review by rvbuilder   [other reviews by rvbuilder]

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Jim wins a one-night stand with an escort who is working her way through nursing school. They end up treating their “date” more like a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship, and fall for each other big time. By mutual agreement, the one-night stand extends to several nights. Then Jim shoots off his mouth and disrespects her. He walks off in a huff and almost instantly regrets it. Then a series of things conspire to make them lose track of each other.

Any further synopsis would give away the story, but I feel safe in saying most romantics (including me) will be satisfied by subsequent events.

I can believe the plot (there’s got to be some hookers with hearts of gold). There are some technical errors (only one “m” in “coma”), but not so many as to be distracting.

Read this one!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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