Better Than Watching Leno by Joris K. Huysmans

Author's Description:
Burton had moved into the latest of many apartments, after the latest of many relationships. It was a dull life, watching the Tonight Show every night. Then he looked out the bathroom window at the apartment next door and saw a curvaceous figure providing a different kind of nightly show.
Size: 20 KB ( ~ 3,793 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Gang Bang, Voyeurism, BBW

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2008-02-15 - (Review Updated: 2008-02-15)

First off, I feel it best to acknowledge that this review was written at the request of the author. Furthermore, in the interest of full disclosure, I should point out that I'm not a BBW aficionado, nor does the voyeurism angle truly excite me.

That said, this story is better than one might be inclined to believe from the scores I gave it. It is a slow paced stroke piece which technically is among the better written stories on this site, and in what (admittedly little) plot it contains has a twist or two. Still, some character development would have been interesting; it seems obvious why one character behaves as she does, in a rather one-dimensional sense, but the main character hints at greater depth which is never really shown.

But then, this is after all still a stroke piece, so such things are quite probably irrelevant. The author manages to find a plausible reason for getting the characters together to get it on, and that's the most plot (or characterization) such stories really require.

For those who enjoy all the codes listed, this is probably an excellent stroke piece. For those who enjoy only some of them, it should still have some appeal, although obviously if neither BBW or voyeurism is among your favorites something else might be a better choice.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 6