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The Master's Project (6) - Micky And Susan by Lubrican

Author's Description:
Bob has managed to get himself into some pretty weird situations during his interviews of married couples for the project. Now he finds out that sometimes, people who are in love, and who stay together for years and years, and who look almost identical, just can't get married. Micky and Susan rock Bob's world, in more ways than one.
Size: 91 KB ( ~ 17,256 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Lesbian, Group Sex, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Pregnancy, Slow

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-11-20 - (Review Updated: 2006-11-22)

In this sixth installment of "The Master's Project", Bob meets Micky and Susan, a couple that has been together for 15 years. Yet, this couple is just a wee bit different from the other couples Bob has met and worked with up to date. They are both women. Read along as Bob works his way through this one.

The sex in this story was nicely done for what the story revolved around. The author may want to consider including the "squirt" code with the rest. It wasn't pure stroke, but the one scene is definitely good.

The plot itself was very nicely done for this one. BOB handled Bob's reaction to the whole thing with a pretty deft touch.

Technically, there weren't any flaws that I noticed.

I liked this story. Again, it wasn't my favorite of this story setting, but it was very good. And BOB handled the subject very well. He didn't write one of those "lesbian(s) meet a guy and decide to give this particular man a whirl" type stories. He simply had two people that fell in love with each other, and they happened to both be female.

I also suspect there may be some foreshadowing for the next (and apparently final planned) episode in this series. If I'm right, it should be a doozey!

[EDIT] apparently someone has inspired BOB, so there will be one more before that final one! Break out your happy dances, folks!

I recommend this story.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10