Mercado Lake by Tallorder64

Description: Bob Long helps a woman that had hit a deer in a snow storm. He finds that she needs help with more than her car.
Size: 304 KB ( ~ 57,647 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Slow

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2012-04-15

Just a little slow to start but once going it moved right along. While the plot was fairly predictable, I was happy to see no skeletons in either of the closets. Yes he has the power and uses it. Personally I thought he uses it too much. Read the story and you'll see what I am talking about.

The biggest problem was the misprints, double words and things that a half way decent beta/proof reader could rectify.

It's a nice story, with the requisite globe trotting. I wonder if a story similar to this could be done with a couple where one wasn't mega rich?
FD rating 1 hankie

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8