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A tropical island turns out to be not just a refuge, but a creator of a sexual paradise for a mother and her children.
Size: 62 KB (12,203 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/ft, Consensual, Incest, Orgy, Black Male, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Squirting

Review by The SlutMan   [other reviews by The SlutMan]

Reviewed:


This is the story of a mother and her two children that become castaways on a very special island. Something about the island induces changes in people, making them literally the best that they can be physically, and imbibes them with a rampant sexuality.

The story is taut and well written, and moves along at a breakneck pace after the characters have been established. It is also pleasantly free of grammatical errors and the punctuation is done correctly as well, there are no errors to distract the reader from the story.

The sex scenes are well done and pretty hot, although I would have liked to see some of them expanded a little, especially the scenes where someone is having sex for the first time. The plot is very imaginative and I found it hard not to skip ahead to see where it was going.

I can heartily recommend this story, it's hot, sexy and a lot of fun.

I can recommend Whiff's other stories too, he covers a wide range of story types with some unique situations and plots; you're bound to find one you'll like.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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