This is a quirky little story by an Author with a terrific imagination. There's not a lot of sex, but the plot is enough to keep you reading.
His writing is excellent, I didn't find any errors in the story; grammar, spelling and punctuation were all correct.
As an Author, I think he has a great storyline here, it would be a snap to add to whenever the spirit moved you.
I enjoyed this story, and a sampling of a couple of his other stories more than measured up to this one. Browse his page and read to your heart's content, his stories are worth the time.