Tiki Trouble by sourdough

Author's Description:
Colin makes an unusual purchase.
Size: 23 KB ( ~ 4,361 words)
Genre: Mind Control
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mind Control, Incest, Mother, Son, Brother, Sister, Lactation

Review by The SlutMan   [other reviews by The SlutMan]

Reviewed: 2007-02-24

This is a quirky little story by an Author with a terrific imagination. There's not a lot of sex, but the plot is enough to keep you reading.

His writing is excellent, I didn't find any errors in the story; grammar, spelling and punctuation were all correct.

As an Author, I think he has a great storyline here, it would be a snap to add to whenever the spirit moved you.

I enjoyed this story, and a sampling of a couple of his other stories more than measured up to this one. Browse his page and read to your heart's content, his stories are worth the time.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8