A 15 year old does her brother a favour pretending to be his g/f at a dinner/dance. But when she finds a girl there likes her brother and then she feels attraction to another girl there she decides to try to put things right. She ends up having wild sex with her new girl. The story unfolds in flashbacks.
Size: 32 KB (6,397 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Fa/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, First, Oral Sex
Review by tendertouch [other reviews by tendertouch]
Reviewed:
OK, a story this short can't have a big, involved plot. The plot is nicely handled for a short story, though, and it moves the characters around pretty smoothly. The Jimmy subplot adds some nice depth as a way of explaining Annie absence from a concurrent party and the inability of her friends to take her place as her brother's date.
There's not a lot of sex so the stroke score is on the low side - but the description of the attraction between the girls is nicely handled and adds an erotic element beyond simply sex.
The flashback method was generally well handled. A bit better differentiation between the time at which the story is taking place and the time that the recounted story takes place would have been helpful at a couple of junctures. In general the technical aspects of the story seemed to be well handled.
As a fan of romance I found that I attraction between Annie and Teri, coupled with their obvious affection for each another, made the story very appealing. The interaction between Annie and Sophie resulting from the telling of the previous nights events was a nice touch as well.
