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16 year old Rick is beat up by the schools bully but Mrs. Wilson, the school principal, takes him into her office and applies some old fashioned TLC.
Size: 24 KB (4,991 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Teenagers, First, Oral Sex
16 year old Rick is beat up by the schools bully but Mrs. Wilson, the school principal, takes him into her office and applies some old fashioned TLC.
Size: 24 KB (4,991 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Teenagers, First, Oral Sex
Review by mbeau [other reviews by mbeau]
Reviewed:
What a nice little fantasy fulfilled. Starts out with a situation that is common to most of the people out there, and then takes it that little extra step farther.
The writing is really nice, and shows the uncertainty of a boys first time quite realistically. The embarrassment and fear are all very well written.
The characters are a little bit two dimensional, but that is to be expected in a piece this short. There is, however, opportunity for a continuation. I would enjoy that quite a bit.
Plot: 6 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
