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Willie's Legacy by Openbook

Author's Description:
On a small, privately owned, Island off the Southeast U.S. coastline, a man buries his brother, and then bends himself to undertake a daunting task which he feels unprepared and unqualified to perform. This is his story and the judgement he assigns to the events that transpired.
Size: 46 KB ( ~ 8,723 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, First, Slow

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2005-12-31

Now take a sub-tropical "paradise", populate it with women, men, and children of all ages, and owned as a private domain by a hereditary family whose scion is dying of cancer and an heir who has never been off the Island ever, and you have the makings of a total breakdown in the delicate economy of this paradise.

The young thirty year old brother of "Willie" has never ever had a job, never ever been trained in finance or business management, and is a total virgin, has to take over when Willie dies.

Read about the trials and tribulations, and his decades long love for his sister in law, and his successful stewardship of the Island and the culmination of his love of the beautiful woman he now calls his own. This is not a stroke story, one of the few I have read on the pages of SOL, but is a tour de force in everything else.


Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Riceeyes   [other reviews by Riceeyes]

Reviewed: 2005-11-16

Willie and Clark live on an island with several hundred other people. When their father dies Willie becomes the caretaker for the island. Later he develops cancer and dies. With very little preparation Clark now becomes the caretaker.

This is a story of triumph over tragedy. While the death of Willie is discouraging, the way Clark takes on the challenges and grows in character is what makes this a great story.

Very little sex but a great plot that is well told. Highly recommended.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10