Control by H. Jekyll


Description: Anne and Geoffrey, sitting in a tree, f-u-c-k-i-n-g. But she left him to go with a monster who could fulfill some need in her, and she has descended into a world of Internet sadism. She's hurt, starved, almost dying in plain sight of thousands of subscribers. No one knows, or cares, or would try to save her. Except Geoff.
NOTE: This is a very dark story of love and evil. Be warned.
Size: 132 KB ( ~ 25,031 words)
Type: Suspense
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, NonConsensual, BDSM, Sadistic

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed: 2010-01-29


Control was a story I had a tough time with. It was readable, and it was coherent, but it was really really dark. Which the author warns you about.

If you like very dark stories then this will appeal to you, but if you are easily upset, then steer clear.

Little to no stroke value, but overall a good piece of fiction. My only real complaint was I did not find the situation or plot very realistic or believable. I think if the author expanded on the story they could make it flow better and put more detail in. This is why I scored the plot lower than normal.

I certainly can, and do, recommend it but please do pay attention to the authors cautions.

Plot: 6 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8