Can Matt Return Home? by Clvfan

Author's Description:
Mathew left his hometown in unhappy circumstances, now he is going back after 12 years. There are old enemies and new friends. Will he be glad he returned or not?
Size: 235 KB ( ~ 44,563 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, NonConsensual, Heterosexual, Cheating, Oral Sex, Voyeurism, Size

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-04-06

In "Can Matt Return Home?", we get the story of Matt Harrison, a former pipsqueak, returning home as a businessman 12-years after he left.

The sex in this story is dominated by a 13.25" penis. Due to Matt's size, it simply has to take up too much of a role in the sex scenes. Matt tickles every cervix he meets, and with Kathy, he even penetrates her cervix. A physical impossibility. If you don't believe me, have the balls to as a OB/GYN doctor

I've frequently found that when you rely on something like a large cock, it tends to dominate the sex scenes in a way that becomes repetitious and boring. That was certainly the case here.

Some of the sex scenes would have been very nice if it wasn't for the size of Matt's penis being the biggest part (pardon the pun) of the scene.

The plot was a fairly simple revenge piece. The former nerd comes home a super hunk. As such, it was horribly predictable. You knew how his sexual encounters were going to go, and that dictated how the story went. Very little suspense or excitement to the story.

The characters themselves were pretty boring. There wasn't any dynamic feature to any of them outside of their sexual or physical self. Only Stan was fun to me.

Technically, this story is pretty poor. Mispelled words were common. Punctuation was spotty. Two people speaking in the same paragraph. Using written and symbolic numbers (thirty and 6) in the same paragraph. A lot of little things that started to become big things due to their frequency. An editor could really help clean up a lot of this, but it would be a bit of work.

Overall, the story was just not very good, in my opinion. The writer seemed to fixate on that overly large penis, and went from there. The weak plot and characters, followed by the many mistakes, make this one a not so enjoyable story to read.

If you are a size fan, this story should make you hot. If you aren't, you may find it to be not very good. Since size isn't a fetish of mine, I didn't enjoy it.

Plot: 4 | Technical Quality: 4 | Appeal to Reviewer: 4