This writer just keeps getting better. He states his first story (see Twice Lucky) is indeed his first works. But, I gotta tell ya, he's definitely 'grown' in his ability to captivate the readers of his work. You can't help but get involved and anticipate the next chapter.
To this reviewer that's one of the most appealing elements to any good story "What happens next?"
Granted there are many other stories out there that have that same appeal. And they're good. But Twice Lucky II just happens to be a STANDOUT story.
Of course, this is just my opinion and I get to share it with all of you. Excellent work Joe!!!