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Twice Lucky II: Time for a Change by Joe J

Author's Description:
The story of Jake Turner continues... If you knew then, what you know now, how would you act?
Size: 1108 KB ( ~ 210,110 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Science Fiction, Time Travel, DoOver, Group Sex, Safe Sex, Oral Sex

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

Reviewed: 2004-01-29


This writer just keeps getting better. He states his first story (see Twice Lucky) is indeed his first works. But, I gotta tell ya, he's definitely 'grown' in his ability to captivate the readers of his work. You can't help but get involved and anticipate the next chapter.

To this reviewer that's one of the most appealing elements to any good story "What happens next?"

Granted there are many other stories out there that have that same appeal. And they're good. But Twice Lucky II just happens to be a STANDOUT story.

Of course, this is just my opinion and I get to share it with all of you. Excellent work Joe!!!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10