Storm by Janice Kirtley


Description: Danny is a trucker, trying to get to Los Angeles on a deadline. Enroute, he meets Stephanie, stranded on a lonely deserted highway, in the pouring rain
Size: 20 KB ( ~ 3,793 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, First, Oral Sex

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2006-03-07


Danny is a long distance trucker; he's very sexual, and loves the single women he meets en route.

Unfortunately, Janice seems to have no idea about long distance rigs or their drivers. So, back to the story, Danny is driving through Arizona, and the weather report calls for dangerous thunderstorms ahead with torrential rains. He picks up a young woman standing beside the road in a downpour, soaking wet, and proceeds to "have his way" with her in his sleeper. And there the story ends. It seems as though the author has suddenly decided that "hey, I told you it is a story about a storm... What more do you want?" And that's the end.

I have been known to give excellent reviews about stories and authors that I personally enjoy, as is my right, but this one just doesn't meet my expectations. Sorry Janice, try a rewrite, and I'll review it again; it does have potential.

Plot: 4 | Technical Quality: 2 | Appeal to Reviewer: 3