V Day by E. Z. Riter


Description: Barbara wants her husband, Karl, to fuck and impregnate Veronica, her best friend. Karl does it but he wonders why Barbara's so adamant Veronica love him.
Size: 30 KB ( ~ 5,689 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, NonConsensual, Reluctant, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Cheating, Group Sex, Oral Sex, Pregnancy

Review by Celeste   [other reviews by Celeste]

Reviewed: 2002-02-27


This is a very good story. It really has two parts.

The first part builds the case for a sexy threesome for Valentine's Day. The author does that part about as well as I've seen it done.

But then the author throws in a really interesting twist. That twist makes the story much more complex. To be honest, I don't think the author works out all the intricacies of this twist, but that's because the ideas are quite complex - if you think about them - and this story DID make me think.

If you haven't already read this story, I urge you to check it out.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10