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Wendy Rides With Me by Steven Seven

Author's Description:
A teenaged girl develops an oral obsession about the adult man who kidnapped, raped, and enslaved her a year earlier. Her favorite form of sex is to suck him off and swallow his cum. He is happy to go along with her desires. One day he decides to take her on a road trip in his compact RV. Even on the road, she can't resist her urges. Neither can he.
Size: 16 KB ( ~ 3,034 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/ft, Mind Control, Slavery, Heterosexual, MaleDom, White Male, White Female, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Small Breasts

Review by rgmanneck   [other reviews by rgmanneck]

Reviewed: 2017-12-10

The author did a really good job on this story. It wasn't gross or crass, but sweet and sexy. The dialogue is what makes this story great. His use of “cunt” and “bitch” is not demeaning, but rather endearing. He also strikes a perfect balance between dominance and submission, consent and obedience, humility and boldness, resignation and aggressiveness. I’m sure there are many more dichotomies.

The dynamic of the story flows smoothly without any hiccups or setbacks and I was left with the need to know where this ride will take them.

The story is entertaining in a lewd sense, of course, but explores the human need – male and female – for sex. Perverted? Yes, but here we are talking about fantasies and as long as they satisfy one’s lustful passion for women without actually hurting them like some fanatic ideologue, or abusing them in the halls of Congress I don’t mind.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9