The author did a really good job on this story. It wasn't gross or crass, but sweet and sexy. The dialogue is what makes this story great. His use of “cunt” and “bitch” is not demeaning, but rather endearing. He also strikes a perfect balance between dominance and submission, consent and obedience, humility and boldness, resignation and aggressiveness. I’m sure there are many more dichotomies.
The dynamic of the story flows smoothly without any hiccups or setbacks and I was left with the need to know where this ride will take them.
The story is entertaining in a lewd sense, of course, but explores the human need – male and female – for sex. Perverted? Yes, but here we are talking about fantasies and as long as they satisfy one’s lustful passion for women without actually hurting them like some fanatic ideologue, or abusing them in the halls of Congress I don’t mind.