The Shack: the Guardians by Todd_d172

Author's Description:
Dancing with the Monster's Daughter
Size: 121 KB ( ~ 22,945 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Crime

Review by bill9900   [other reviews by bill9900]

Reviewed: 2018-05-09


Back in 2016, I reviewed Todd_d172's story "Blue Topaz Eyes" and suggested that visitors to storiesonline.net had an opportunity to read some very interesting stories. He was new to SOL then, and all of his stories are a cut above many that get posted here. Totally worth reading.

The one I just finished is "The Shack: the Guardians", posted in September, 2017.

Todd_d172 writes an exceptional story. Top marks for imagination, plot line, the flow of dialog, etc. This story is very appealing and well laid out. The only slight-negative factor is that the grammar can occasionally seem a little awkward.

But it never gets in the way, so I highly recommend you give this story, and any of his other stories, a try. They make for some very enjoyable reading. And several bring a character or two along from another story, so it makes for a very interesting fictional world. Highly enjoyable!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10