The Runaway by Geek of Ages

Author's Description:
She shows up at his door, needing a safe place to hide from her abusive father. He lets her in, unaware of the tangled web he's about to be entered into... [Rape is discussed]
Size: 758 KB ( ~ 143,739 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Tear Jerker, First, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Petting, Pregnancy, Safe Sex, Slow

Review by rgmanneck   [other reviews by rgmanneck]

Reviewed: 2017-08-22

I don't believe in reviewing an unfinished story. However, I was mesmerized from the first chapter with the skill of this author.

It is a very touching story, reflective of some of the real abuses and injustices that children suffer at the hands of bullying fathers.

The plot (so far) is well constructed and thought through, which makes it so realistic and worthwhile reading. It may not be entirely original, but it certainly is in how the author weaves a tale that is both heart wrenching, yet uplifting, and hopefully will end leaving characters and readers optimistic about the human spirit.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10