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Pēteris by Omachuck

Author's Description:
Set in Lazlo Zalezac's 'Damsels In Distress Universe,' this story follows yet another warrior hero. Pete is a recently discharged combat medic who is recruited by a Hero's two granddaughters who desperately want to go to Chaos as Companions. Note: There is much violence in this story, and in later chapters, allusions to off-camera rape, but I have not used the rape code.
Size: 301 KB ( ~ 57,079 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, First, Petting, Pregnancy, Violent

Review by therev   [other reviews by therev]

Reviewed: 2017-12-29

I found this to be interesting. It follows the general outline for the DiD; however, the author was allowed to get away with a variation that gave this story an interesting twist.

The story finished with an obvious intent of a sequel. Hopefully it will be as interesting as the original,

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9