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Life on Another Planet by Coaster2


Description: Jesse Peterson went to bed with a headache and woke up in an entirely different world. How he copes is the focus of this story.
Size: 783 KB ( ~ 148,480 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Consensual, Time Travel

Review by pawwriter   [other reviews by pawwriter]

Reviewed: 2017-03-20


To start out, Coaster is Mean. He doesn't give hints. After 2 day of chapters, I had a couple questions about what might happen. Just be patient, he said. My questions were answered in the story the next day. 2 days later, I had a couple more questions. Still no hints. Again answers happened the next day. 2 days later, a catastrophic things happened. Now I really had questions, but I decided to be patient this time and not ask. And of course things did get straightened out over the reminder of the story and Jesse's problems were mostly resolved.

This was a time travel story, but with a twist. I won't say what it was, but it was quite a surprise when it happened.

Coaster always does a good job of getting you involved with his characters, as you can see since I had so many questions. His characters don't always go through the story with no problems. but things usually do get resolved smoothly with few unresolved questions.

I also found very few grammatical errors in his writing. His editors do a good job.

Another great romantic story, just what I am used to from this author. I wouldn't mind a sequel, however.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10