A review for the esteemed author 'Nathan Wolf' of his first writing endeavor.
The 'Secrets of Liberty Mountain' by 'Nathan Wolf' is an interesting story, take sixty-seven year old Dennis Richards a disabled veteran suffering from being exposed to Agent Orange from the Vietnam war, add in a 35 year old nymphomaniac , Darlene. They became sexually involved with each other after spending many nights in a bar together, eventually moving in with each other.
After Darlene lost her job due to the real-estate development company in which she had invested fifteen years of her life went belly-up. Together Dennis and Darlene strike out on an adventure that is hard to believe. The sex is very good but you sometimes feel that you are reading an anatomy text book as Dennis describes his actions to a woman's vagina, each and every part of a woman's sex organ or his problem with his penis, the naming of the different parts of the vagina takes away the mood of the sex scene that's being described, a little bit is acceptable but a full grown anatomy lessons?
Dennis the guy telling his tale is a likeable character who is just trying to fit into a community of lesbians who haven't seen a male in a long time. Dennis is a very easy going laid back guy who has fallen into a paradise of lesbians some who go both ways. Even though he, in the first 19 chapters, only has sex with Darlene. He does spend the night with Lisa. He also went hunting with Alice. Meanwhile Darlene is getting reacquainted with the women she had left fifteen years ago.
Overall the story is very good I only noticed one glaring sentence that didn't make any sense so the story flowed remarkably well. I will not rate the story until it is finished which I hope 'Nathan Wolf ' works at doing asap as I am now involved with the story.
Reviewed: 2017-03-04 - (Review Updated: 2017-09-10)
This story is the only one that I have reviewed before its completion and this was done because Mr. Wolf was almost pleading with his readers to let him know what they thought of his work. He still appears to be a little anxious as to how his book is perceived by his readers.
Fear not Mr. Wolf, you are doing well and writing a very good story. Ten more chapters have been added since my previous comments were written. The plot has moved on and developed well. We are still left wanting more and wishing that you would write faster, without dropping your high standards!
From comments in Mr. Wolf's blog, it looks as though we are about 80% through the story. That gives plenty of time for clever twists to the plot, development of characters who have, so far, played a minor role and a really strong conclusion.
This is a book that is well worth reading. The author's style is improving (not that it was bad in the first place but he is obviously more comfortable with putting digital pen to digital paper), the readability score remains very high and the entertainment factor is up there with the best that is on SOL.
That's a high standard, Mr. Wolf; be proud of your words and keep them coming.
Reviewed: 2017-02-25 - (Review Updated: 2017-08-01)
An interesting premise, an older gentleman and his bi lover join a commune of lesbians, some of whom could also be bi. There is even an 18 year old daughter. Throw nudism into the mix and you can tell that interest from either sex won't be easy to hide. The possibilities for sex, romance and love are endless, maybe even some poly relationships, which is one of my favorites.
The sex in this is very good, if I was rating it, I would give it a 9.
The characters so far have been well rounded and interesting. With another 20-30 women we have not met, the author has a good bunch of different types to choose from.
The proofreading in this story was good.
As of August 1, 2017 we still have a bit of Book 1 to go. A series of 'Secrets of Liberty Mountain' will definitely be interesting. I'll look for further stories.