Secrets of Liberty Mountain: Family of Sisters by Nathan Wolf

Description: Dennis Richards is a 65-year-old retired Vietnam Veteran romantically involved in a May-December relationship with Darlene, a 35-year-old executive. What Dennis does not realize is that his lover is also one of the founding sisters of an off-the-grid lesbian survival community hidden deep in the mountains of western Colorado. NOTE: Much of the story (26,500 words) has been edited by volunteer editor Pepere, and updated by the author to include a new chapter.
Size: 145 KB ( ~ 27,496 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Consensual, NonConsensual, Reluctant, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Post Apocalypse, Cheating, Exhibitionism, First, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Petting, Squirting, Public Sex, Small Breasts, Nudism

Review by Derek Smith   [other reviews by Derek Smith]

Reviewed: 2017-03-04

It is a pity that Mr. Wolf has hidden his talents from us for so long. He tells us that this is his first venture into literature and his initial offering on SOL.

Mr. Wolf, you have done well. This is an interesting story, the plot in a little different from the average but it has been carefully constructed, is plausible and is filled with well rounded characters.

I'm not going to to tell you all about. Why spoil the plot? It is not so long that you will have to make an enormous investment of time, to read it. When you do invest that time, you will be richly rewarded and like me, you will be eagerly awaiting the next part.

Come on Mr. Wolf, pen to paper or fingers to keys, hurry up, you have some impatient new fans out here!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by pawwriter   [other reviews by pawwriter]

Reviewed: 2017-02-25 - (Review Updated: 2017-03-03)

An interesting premise, an older gentleman and his bi lover join a commune of lesbians, some of whom could also be bi. There is even an 18 year old daughter. Throw nudism into the mix and you can tell that interest from either sex won't be easy to hide. The possibilities for sex, romance and love are endless, maybe even some poly relationships, which is one of my favorites. .

The sex in this intro is very good, if I was rating it, I would give it a 9.

The characters so far have been well rounded and interesting. With another 20-30 women we have not met, the author has a good bunch of different types to choose from.

The proofreading in this story was pretty good but it looked like it got worse as chapters continued.

A series of 'Secrets of Liberty Mountain' will definitely be interesting. I'll look for further stories.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10