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A Girl Named Blowjob by Steven Seven

Author's Description:
LOTS OF SCAT! Stop reading if shit and piss turn you off. Extreme Male Dominance and utter female submission. The Master has hyper-tech powers. He possesses a hidden planet; his personal paradise. The Master populates his World with female sex slaves. Some he synthesizes himself with genetic engineering and biotechnology. This is a story about Amber, one of his synthesized girls. It's her first day of slavery at age 14. To learn more about Master's World, read "Welcome to My World".
Size: 30 KB ( ~ 5,689 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Mind Control, Slavery, Heterosexual, Fiction, DomSub, MaleDom, Harem, Anal Sex, Analingus, First, Oral Sex, Scatology, Water Sports

Review by Lugh   [other reviews by Lugh]

Reviewed: 2017-03-09


For an author, the basic score is sometimes frustrating, as it doesn't provide the three-part nuances that a review lets me use. For example, the story, A Girl Named Blowjob by Steven Seven, is clearly marked with warnings about its themes, many of which, such as extreme dominance, pain, and scat, squick me. Those make for a very low "appeal" for me, but not the lowest. The lowest would be ungrammatical, badly spelled squicking. [Buttgasm? Really!]

When I read the story to understand how well the author addressed those themes, as well as his assumption about synthetic sex objects in a world that he defines, I have to say that he does better with what he says he will do.

Yes, his female protagonist exemplifies a "...brainwashe[d] and reprograms them into ideal sex slaves who perfectly match his personal desires. He makes them want what he wants them to want. The women he synthesizes himself using genetic engineering and biotechnology are pre-programmed from the start to the Master’s exacting specifications. "

I wouldn't want such a slave. In the real world, I regret that I've known some otherwise wonderful women whose needs for submission and pain were things that I could not meet.

But if these are your fantasies, the author expresses them well (technical rating). It's more stream of consciousness than intricately (plot)ted.

Plot: 5 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 3