My Journey - Book 1: Collars by Xalir


Description: Matt Russell lives a complicated life. He lives next door to his best friend, Becky and the girl of his dreams: her sister, Lana. When his life turns upside down, he finds things happening that he never could have guessed. Is it for the better or for the worst?
Size: 1464 KB ( ~ 277,618 words)
Type: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Tear Jerker, Crime, Incest, Sister, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Light Bond, Humiliation, Group Sex, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Petting, Squirting, Water Sports, Cream Pie, Spitting, Exhibitionism, Analingus, Slow

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed: 2016-09-17


This is an enthralling story that sucked me in and then kicked me in the butt with the sudden twist that will, hopefully, be explained in Book 2.

The Good:
All of the main characters are multifaceted and interesting. The plot is a roller coaster ride -- big hill followed with exciting twists, turns, and drops as the ride smoothes a bit.

The Bad:
There some minor issues with consistency. We only get a full report of first bedtimes four out of five times. The main character starts to become superhuman in reading people and nerdy activities. I have read this twice, and think that the sudden twist at the end is precipitated by events that have not been revealed.

The last Call:
This is a very strong first outing for the author, and it gives me hope for the next works to come off the assembly line. Definately worth worth a read.

--Manny

Ps -- If you are wondering why this review is late, it's because I read it again. It's that good.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 10