My 10 rating comes from how this story hits me in the groin, ignoring ethnic stereotyping, and also the minor mention of bestiality. I have a letch for consciously slutty women, honoring them as people who help me work around my upbringing that tended to demand notarized contracts before touching or even flirting. No submission or dominance in this, but respect and joy for someone who makes it clear that they want it.
I'm a very visual person, and Anna is quite good at the part of that which involves describing provocative clothing. She rarely, however, describes her appearance, which I'm guessing is an oversight, not deliberate. For me, the British style is easily understandable.
Plot isn't complex, but N/A isn't a complaint here. I'm tempted to use some of the elements and stereotypes in a story developing in my own mind.
I can only say that this is a story that wasn't bad because it wasn't long enough, but left me fantasizing about climbing into the story and participants!