Dawn of the Federation Book I : Tomorrow Never Knows by The Slim Rhino


Description: Before I tried my hand at original stories, I've been dabbling in Star Trek fanfiction for six years, mainly the early noughts series "Enterprise", which could have been so great without Berman and Braga ruining it. This is my Magnum Opus in the field. I've been working on it since 2009 and it is still active, at currently around 300K words. It starts directly after the late season four episode "Bound" and goes AU from there. It describes the lives of Commander T'Pol and Charles Tucker III.
Size: 776 KB ( ~ 147,153 words)
Type: Fan Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fan Fiction, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Space, Aliens, Oral Sex, Workplace, Nudism

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed: 2015-08-02


This is the absolute best fanfic I've ever read.

Characters see like themselves, even if things are revealed that were not on the show. Actions seem more or less natural. Plot is interesting, and reminiscently episodic.

I voted this a 10, and (you may have noticed) I'm extremely picky.

I don't know about you guys, but I'm looking forward to book 2. And book 102. :-)

--Manny

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 10